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hey guys i just finished my first song and created a little video to go with it. (about six hours in total to do both)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qsd3t096rGI

can you guys help me make any changes or how i could improve in the future. A few nice comments might be nice aswell lol. thanks in advance

(sorry if this is in the wrong section im new)