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You need some natural minor scale stuff in there. Just the pentatonic gets way too repetitive after awhile. I find the pentatonic should only be used sparingly for backings like those.

And less is better sometimes. Work on holding your bends longer/smoother with more sustain. Put more feel into your notes. You're on your way if you wanna be a fast player, but slow it down for now and work on your accuracy, and your natural minor scale. It's only 2 more notes than what you're playing, find those 2 notes everywhere they are within what you were playing there, and it'll sound awesome.

Keep it up.

Ps, here's some stuff I did with just the minor scale....
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344332
Last edited by JudgeDrey at Jul 29, 2010,