#1
No drums or bass, so it might be a tad boring, but I'm no good at those. It's pretty short, so it shouldn't take long to review. C4C and all that jazz.
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more melodeath.gp5
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#2
it's not bad but I just think we don't need any more melodeath :/ although the riff at bar 57 is rly cool.
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#3
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it's not bad but I just think we don't need any more melodeath :/ although the riff at bar 57 is rly cool.

I know, that's why i don't like to write it, but i came up with some cool riffs and ran with it.
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Come to think of it, my penis should've listened to more death metal.


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So my question is. Can Pre-Cum fluid pass through my underwear, my jeans, onto and through her jeans, through her underwear, and impregnate her?
#4
Honestly, nothing I haven't heard before. That is assuming that you wanted innovate in some way, of course. Without drums and bass though I can't really give much advice or really say anything more than that this is very generic melodeath. If that's what you wanted, then great work.
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