People may have looked at tis thread----> https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1339399

I while ago and commented on it and such.

Well its been a week or 2 and ive made more improvments to the song
and would like even MORE feedback too get me out of this writing block

you will be glad to now the gay intro has gone and
my tone isnt as treble as before.

here it is ----->http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/xXCRA1GXx/
This is a MotherFxcking Invatation
God damn. Now that's what the **** I'm talking about! That intro was beast! My only criticism is the legato open string taps, you definitely need to spice those up some more. Add a couple notes here and there and it should be good. Great job on this one. I can't wait to hear the whole song.


You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.