#2
Somehow I like it. I was a bit confused in the beginning because of the abrupt change of the keys from chord to chord. Sounds a bit synthetic to me.

The rest of the song reminds me a lot of angels and airwaves (or what they are called). I like it, I like the autotune on your vocals. They fit quite well in this song.

I'd give it 4,5/5 stars.


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#3
Thanks for the comments, I see what you mean about Angels and Airwaves, it's probably the pads and reverb.

I'll check out your song now
#4
Nice song, got that chilled out vibe about it. The auto-tune vocals aren't really to my taste, but nevertheless work really well. I think the acoustic guitar should be a bit more prominent in the mix though, even if the increase is only very slight.
I do really like the subtlety of the bass though, its nice and smooth, but fills out the sound perfectly.
Lyrics are a bit so-so, not amazing, but certainly not bad.

Overall, I reckon this song is pretty awesome. Plenty of potential, can't wait to hear what you come up with next.
#5
Thanks for that

The lyrics are my weakest point as I pretty much just sung them out loud to write them rather than actually putting time into thinking about it.

I'm working on more music to record soon

Thanks again!
#6
I think you could have used slightly different voicings for the pad chords to make it flow better, the beginning feels a bit "jumpy", and the pads that enter at about 1:10 definitely needs a low cut. The autotune effect gets a bit annoying after a while, I think it would have been better if it had been used a little more selectively. It's a nice tune though and I second the Angels and Airwaves influence.
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