#2
Man that was awesome, way more tech than anything I write lol. I really liked the energy and speed.

Obviously real drums, bass, etc. are needed, but besides that I can't really think of anything I didn't like about it. I mostly just have compliments haha.

I would love to hear a higher quality version. I can't think of any bands it reminds me of, maybe Children of Bodom?

There's too much going on for it to be "catchy", for me at least. I wouldn't say that's a bad thing, it just means the song remains epic every time you hear it.

Anyways, here is my song.
Looking at Song2 btw, not song1.

http://www.soundclick.com/tallliketrees
#4
Quote by iskateenjoi
Man that was awesome, way more tech than anything I write lol. I really liked the energy and speed.

Obviously real drums, bass, etc. are needed, but besides that I can't really think of anything I didn't like about it. I mostly just have compliments haha.

I would love to hear a higher quality version. I can't think of any bands it reminds me of, maybe Children of Bodom?

There's too much going on for it to be "catchy", for me at least. I wouldn't say that's a bad thing, it just means the song remains epic every time you hear it.

Anyways, here is my song.
Looking at Song2 btw, not song1.

http://www.soundclick.com/tallliketrees

Listened to your "moviesong" pretty good man just need to work on the guitar tone it sounds a bit too trebly for my tastes anyways apart from that its great, gives it a new feeling when the backbeat comes in on the rhythm guitar. Thanks for checking out mine, I don't really listen to any children of bodom anymore but I guess I could see where it might sound a bit like them
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#5
Great stuff. Apart from the need to record this properly, which has already been said, I only have one comment: you're wasting the intro/outro riff. That thing kicks all kinds of ass and should appear at least once more in the song. There. Now go and conquer the world.
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#6
Lars,
Fingers of Fury! Holy Crap! You sure know how to play a guitar! I have never seen a guitar quite like that before. Amazing to watch you in action on the video. Just wish the audio was better quality. It's super hard to make money in the music biz, but I'm curious if you're looking to become a professional guitarist. You certainly have some chops! Please review my music before you get too famous at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344496
#7
Dude that was ****in' bad ass. Its like Rob Flynn exhumed Dimebag, knocked him up, and raised the resulting offspring as a lich of metalhood.

I would very much like to hear a better recorded version of that.
#8
Well, I've learned 2 things since watching that video: 1. You are a better guitarest then me in terms of technique in every poss way, lol. And 2. While I could praise this song all day long, even a song like this needs some critiquing. I'm not gonna knock the song writing skills of your because they're really good, but if there's one thing this song could use (it was stated earlier) it could be dumbed down, or simplified a little to make it catchier

I do see some Trivium (crusade era) and at times some Nevermore influences in there. I really admire you picking technique. No wasted motion and very fluid, and like the rest of these guys want to hear a properly recorded version and will look forward to it.

Here's mine

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1341315

It's like yours that it's taped onto youtube, though I don't have a back track nor the guitar wizardry as you, haha. It's Heavy Metal (I hate genrenizing) so I can tell it'll at least be a little up your alley. Cheers
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