#1
crit4crit
BAD KITTY

It really doesn't matter
If I'm wrong all the time,
I just wish my doubts
Weren't always right.
They say it's a waste of time
I say it's time well spent,
But the treasures in my world
Are worth less than their two cents.

I'm catching falling angels
Only to find out,
There's a good reason
Heaven cast them out.
But it's a hard to let go
Of something you never had;
Long walks on the beach
To be buried in the sand.

I wish that you meant
Every word of it all,
With your face in your hands
And your back up against the wall.
But you only say your sorry
Because you know you got caught;
You only hold my hand
'Cause you're afraid of getting lost.

I'm catching falling angels
Only to find out,
There's a good reason
Heaven cast them out.
But it's a hard to let go
Of something you never had;
Long walks on the beach
To be buried in the sand.

Did you only stand behind me
Just to backstab me?
No good ever
Comes from goodbye.

It's a hard to let go
Of something you never had;
Long walks on the beach
To be buried in the sand.
Last edited by themarsvolta at Aug 3, 2010,
#3
i liked this one, quite some bit.
"I'm catching falling angels
Only to find out,
There's a good reason
Heaven cast them out."
best few lines, thanks for the crit mate!
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....