#1
okay I have been working on this piece for the last few days and thought I would post it up and see what people thought so far. My biggest complaint so far is the programming, it doesn't ebb and flow like I want it to. I would appreciate any advice on how to make it sound less robotic and of course and composition advice that you have for me. This is only the first ten bars as well so it isn't nearly complete but I would still appreciate any input. It is the track titled school test on my myspace page.

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#2
frog_friend,
I think it sounds pretty good so far, though my sense of timing isn't the greatest without drums or percussion. I suggest adding drums, percussion, or a click track just for temporary purposes, to see if you stay in time with the beat. Once you're done with your click track, just mute it (or delete it if necessary). I think it sounds pretty realistic. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344496
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Aug 3, 2010,