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Hey there! This is a little poem I wrote last night. I'd like to flesh it out into a full song, but I just wanted to see what people thought of it before I went on. Constructive criticism is welcome!

If I Can Dream

If I can dream,
That everything,
Was OK in the world today,
Then maybe we,
Yes you and me,
Could do away with some of this decay,
And if we aim,
To put out the flames,
Maybe our children will do the same,
And the world could be fixed,
And the world could be clean,
All I need to do is dream.