#1
Don't you agree?
We move way too fast, act too slow, and live in the past.
This is a call to arms.
So surrender your innocence and give in.
Temptation resides
In a blonde haired saint.

Don't you agree?
We are the captains of our own ship, but we don't know where we are really going.
Now raindrops fall
And rejuvenate me.

For no reason at all, I feel as if I'm ten feet tall,
As seasons change, so do we.
Let's rearrange, it's within our reach,
We've got what we need, it's in our hopes and dreams.

What if I told you?
Theres more to life than this
What if you could start over?
Instead of getting older
What if I told you?
There really is such a thing as true happiness.

As we become who we are, we begin to see.
There's a reason for you, and a reason for me.

Don't you now see?
We can predict it all
We've just been trying too hard
To suddenly give up and live a lie
Worth dying for.
Try not to blink, and it will all be over in a flash
Hold on to it before it's gone.

We've never been sure
Slowly and steadily life goes on
This may never end.

For no reason at all, I feel as if I'm ten feet tall.
As seasons change, so do we.
Let's rearrange, it's within our reach.
We've got what we need, it's in our hopes and dreams.

What if for once you could live a life of certainty?
Instead of tragedy.
What if you could feel satisfied?
With a reason to live your life
What if just for a moment you could pause time?
And fix everything out of line
What if you were given one more chance?
Would you try again...

As we become who we are, we begin to see
There's a reason for you, and a reason for me.

I want, and I need
Some sense of normality
And you want, you need
A fresh start, or a new beginning
We don't think or believe,
In fairy tales, or non-existent dreams
It's so easy
To lose grip on reality.

We need to sit down and make a list
Of anything that could exist
After this
Let's rewind, rewind
And prioritize
Rewind, rewind
And prioritize.

I know it's really long, leave feedback! I'm always open minded. C4C if you'd like.
Last edited by Jake9412 at Aug 5, 2010,
#3
Thanks! Finally someone replied. Maybe you could also check out my song 'On The Surface'? No one has replied to it yet haha
#4
on a second read i seem to have problem with verse2 and maybe the last two lines of verse1 but no need to change anything... i dont know i like whole piece but.. i dont know!! ahh figure it out yourself and ya i'll say it again i reeeaaaally like it!! mind checking my creation "drop the world".