#1
please give me truthfull comments


I don’t write songs for just anyone
She ought ‘a be special she ought ‘a be the one
I’d memorize every word write down every line
Ain’t a thing in my heart I’m gonna keep inside tonight

Cause if anything I’d say could take your breath away
Then everything I’d do oh I’d do it for you
Cause you know I can’t resist your smile or your lips
Then maybe what I’ll do Is write this song for you

Every time I get close to you do you feel what I feel too
The passion building deep inside
the kind that brings my words alive

Cause if anything I’d say could take your breath away
Then everything I’d do oh I’d do it for you
Cause you know I can’t resist your smile or your lips
Then maybe what I’ll do Is write this song for you

Now I don’t write songs for just anyone
I know that your special I think you’re the one
So I’ve memorized every word I’ve wrote down every line
There’s not a thing in my heart I’ve kept inside tonight
#2
I like the song as a whole. Also, I like how you've repeated the first stanza at the end, but changed it, as if you've found what you're looking for. From this song, I'd say that you've been looking for love, and now you think you just might have found it. If so, congratulations and I hope it works out.

I personally would like to see you add another verse in maybe, it seems a little on the short side.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344472
or
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1343189