#1
Please critique, i'm not sure what genre of music this is.

girls look at me like i'm a coward
they run and hide when i open up
people pass, yet still i wonder
when the ****, i've had enough

chorus:
another creepy crawler, in my mind
running blind
fire with his stinger slashed
the numbness lingers
blues burn't in a flash

there's a tick and it's crawlin
down my spine, a pure bee line
she takes my blood, soaks it friendly
fills me with a black river
where i dive, a thriller and a killer

another creepy crawler, in my mind
running blind
fire with his stinger slashed
the numbness lingers
blues burn't in a flash
#2
when i read this at first i kinda felt a little corey taylor in the word play and i also read in the way that he does the verse for duality....good job
one x_vox
#4
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Qu'est-ce que c'est?

Came here to say this.


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(Discussion about the Orange Tiny Terror)
#5
I figured it was 'ein bisschen' slipknot-like?
powerful, and ready to be put on music