#1
I wrote this about my recent trip to the beach, and one particular night. It isn't my best work, but I hope to work it into something usable. Its in a Ben Harper/Jack Johnson sorta category. Any tips or comments will be greatly appreciated. C4C

Your shooting star goes flyin' by
Underwater if full of fireflies
A tear slowly rolls down my eye

If only you were by my side
Yes, If only you were by my side

I dig my toes into this icy sand
The ocean mist blows thru my hand
It won't feel real till you understand

I need you by my side
I need you by my side

The stars above never lie
And tell me to give it a try
I call you up one last time
But the words I want just can't fly

I hang it up, and shake my head
Head on back to my lonesome bed
And recall what shoulda been said

I need you by my side
Yes, I need you by my side
MIM Tele
Fender Blues Jr NOS
Schecter Omen 6
Squier Strat
Greg Bennett Acoustic
other crap...
If seeing is believing...

...Then believe that we have lost our eyes!!
#3
thx man, I have been working on it, and have some chords figured out that would fit the lines.
MIM Tele
Fender Blues Jr NOS
Schecter Omen 6
Squier Strat
Greg Bennett Acoustic
other crap...
If seeing is believing...

...Then believe that we have lost our eyes!!