#1
Hey i just turned 18 and play guitar in my free time and write music tell me what you think of my new song called "July Angel" i was messing around and it just kinda came to me hope you enjoy! I wrote july angel for my wonderful girlfriend whom i met in july but now she is off at college.

and as always feel free to comment, thumbs up, and subscribe!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AebTLeHH8pM
#2
I don't mind that at all. You have quite a nice voice.
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#3
Hey man! This was really nice. I like your voice a lot, it sounds soothing, and "honest" if you know what I mean, as if you mean every word you're singing. You probably do, obviously, seeing as this is for your girlfriend... I wish you two good luck!

If I have to criticise something - which is hard because I can't criticise the singing or the playing - I'll say that you shouldn't upload to YouTube next time. It really compromises audio quality... use UG profiles (upload in 320kbps mp3), or SoundCloud or something. Should be much better!

Crit my song, please? Also dedicated to my (ex-)girlfriend:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1348315

Cheers!
#4
Very relaxing.

Relateable to some people

Very well composed, lyrically and musically.
#5
Really, really well done dude! I looove your voice, so very nice, The song is really soothing bro. The lyrics are really nice If this song were on the radio, haha, I'd dedicate this song to a girl I like Great Job bro! Very very nice song. I love the part when you sing "July Angel won't you come take me away" and you start strumming, its so great

Critique my demo? It's a sorta alt. rock song. I hope you like it! https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1349499
#6
Firstnamesmusic,
Guitar playing and singing are quite good. Guitar & vocal melodies are very good too! The guitar reminds me a bit of Led Zeppelin (this is a compliment). Audio quality is good for youtube, but you could probably get better at soundclick.com. I think you should pan the audio closer to the center. The company I work for has its corporate headquarters in Birmingham, but I work in Los Angeles. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344496
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Aug 13, 2010,