#1
MEDIOCRITY

VERSE 1
Im stepping on the pedal but im going nowhere fast
My friends are flying by me and im running out of gas.
Well im tired of the waiting and the writing and the hating
Im tired of the sadness and the fighting and the breaking.

CHORUS
I am really tired and i might be getting sick
So i better get well soon and maybe that will do the trick
But tomorrow wont be famous and i will still be me.
Im sitting on lifes side lines in this mediocrity.

VERSE 2
So if your just like me and you want to have a voice
Grab your own guitar and make some ****ing noise.
Im tired and im fed up with this lack of inspiration
So im smoking just to get by while i find my destination.

BREAKDOWN
I believe in love and peace
But thats not all so rare these days
But i do believe that happiness
Is found in many ways.
So believe me when i tell you
To down that seventh beer
It could be your best decision
Or it could become a living fear.

But life can be a let down
So you need a little pick-me-up
Every now and then.

CHORUS
I am really tired and i might be getting sick
So i better get well soon and maybe that will do the trick
But tomorrow wont be famous and i will still be me.
Im sitting on lifes side lines in this mediocrity.

VERSE 3
Im surpressing all my feelings and im running low on grass
Im playing out my future while im avoiding all my past
Im finding out who i am and im not sure if ill like it
But its my last resort and im not sure i can fight it.

OUTRO
I dont think i can fight me or this mediocrity
anymore...
Last edited by dyllpickle94 at Aug 9, 2010,
#3
You're new to writing, aren't you?
If you stick with it, you'll hate this in a few years. Trust me.

I think you need to read a lot more, expand your vocabulary, and start listening to hip hop so you can learn how to do more things than simple, overused end rhymes and aabb schemes.
the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones that never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn


#4
Has a really strong rhythm and relateable subject. My favourite line is
"It could be your best decision
Or it could become a living fear." as it sums up the gambles involved in every day life and what we do to escape.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1348602
Quote by Next Hendrix
Walk in on your wife with another man.
Kill them both.
Go to prison in Louisiana.
Have conversation with the Devil.
Instant harmonica asskickery.