#1
"Friend"

she told me for the last time 'no'
and i really mean it 'no'
maybe, we'll see tomorrow
but for now, let's be just real good friends

and i complied and lied to her
i said 'thats fine with me'
maybe, we'll see tomorrow
i wouldn't want, for us to see the end

so she started stumbling
soon began to fall
excited over this and that
and then she made the call

said thanks for all the support
i hope you're doing well
you've always been so good to me
you'll always be my friend

i said
i guess thats what im here for
if you ever come around
you can always come to me
i'll never ever turn you down
but maybe thats what i should do
but i know i never will
because i guess thats just the way i'm built to be

call me friend
call me brother
call me what you want me to be
as long as i have a name, i guess it's all fine
you made it seem like you were giving me
all those so-called 'signs'

it's not right
its not the time
im not feeling all this anyway
your excuse is not to blame
because its my own goddamn shame
some excuse
that i have
why dont you do the ****ing math

i said
i guess thats what im here for
if you ever come around
you can always come to me
i'll never ever turn you down
but maybe thats what i should do
but i know i never will
because i guess thats just the way i'm built to be

i can wait
#2
I had a Bullet for my Valentine kidna feel to this song, which i think would be very cool (: Tho i must say, i think the fact that you put "never ever" kinda puts the lyrics a bit down..i don't really liek those two words together :P hehe. so maybe you should just take out ever? If you want.. But overall, these are extremely nice lyrics. What kinda music were you planning to make for this? (:

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1348545
#4
Hey, thanks for the crits. I did the same for yours.

Quote by Maddita
I had a Bullet for my Valentine kidna feel to this song, which i think would be very cool (: Tho i must say, i think the fact that you put "never ever" kinda puts the lyrics a bit down..i don't really liek those two words together :P hehe. so maybe you should just take out ever? If you want.. But overall, these are extremely nice lyrics. What kinda music were you planning to make for this? (:


I originally planned for it to be a little sour acoustic song, but the Bullet for my Valentine style seems interesting. Y'know have the song try on a few outfits :P
#5
Good lyrics. I can really empathise with the feeling. I like the repetion line "maybe, we'll see tomorrow" as it can be interpreted in several different ways.
I'd be interested to hear at as an acoustic song or like Maddita suggested. Again agreeing with Maddita about taking out the "ever" because I can't think of anything else to criticise.

C4C

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1348602
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