Vespertine Labor.gp5
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....
Does this come with lyrics/melody? Because I'd like to here that.
I reckon, some parts could do qith a bit of a switch up.

The bridge, for example, is abit bland and repetitive, needs thickening out a bit (chords, a pad, strings..), though, perhaps with the lyrics/melody with it, it may sound better.

Also, the little bit of soloing in the last chorus is a bit meh, maybe you could try running each pattern into the next bar, letting it flow abit more.

However, I probably shouldn't have started on a bad note, because I did enjoy the song quite abit, and I reckon, if I could hear the melody/lyrics, it would make a decent, enjoyable song.
Last edited by Chrisseh at Aug 12, 2010,