Reviewing as I listen: Nice intro with the snare drums. Ahh the vocals, at first they sound just a tiny bit off color but then they fit perfectly with the music. The lyrics so far are good and so is the instrumentation of the song. It's a different type of song, I like it. I haven't heard something quite like this before. The guitar work is nice and the quiet verse works well. The mixing could be worked on just a bitch, I think. But then again I'm no expert on mixing so just giving my two cents about the mixing here. The song works well as an Alt. Rock song. Great job dude!! Keep it up bro!! It was really well done

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