#3
doofus41,
I hope the lyrics were tongue in cheek! Audio quality is good for youtube, it probably would be better if you posted it on soundclick.com or similar. Guitar playing is tight & I like the riffs; tone is pretty good. Drums are pretty good. This song reminds me of a cross between metal and the Ramones. Vocal melody & style work for this song. Lead guitar is pretty good. I don't condone the naughty lyrics, but it's a good recording. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1344496&page=1&pp=20