#2
It sounds like the same notes (sort of) repeated over and over again...
Maybe try mixing that up with some faster runs?
Also seems like sometimes your bending a little flat or sharp.
Maybe try using different patterns, because even if it's just audio, I can tell your using 1 pattern.
Also rythm is kind of off... Seems like your starting a little before or after the beat...

Try using more hammer on's and pull-offs to make it flow more....

^Not trying to sound like a douche just trying to help
#3
Nah I take no offence haha, I agree with everything you're saying. For some reason I can't push past using one pattern..