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So, a while back i posted a song called tomb of lies,
wasn't really happy with it so i sat down a few nights ago to
write a few more verses and lines so pretty much 2/3rd of
it is new material....

Tomb of Lies

*verse*
Crawl away
Run for cover,
Lost inside
You will suffer,

Death and sorrow
No tomorrow,
Pain and passion
Feels so hollow,

*chorus*
Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

The treasure in this tomb of lies,
The treasure in this tomb of lies,

*verse*
This is what
You chose to be
living on internally,

Forgetting what
I could forsee,
Mistaking you
For reality,

*chorus*
Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

The treasure in this tomb of lies,
The treasure in this tomb of lies,

*verse*
One last breath
Before you die,
Speak your mind
Now say goodbye,

Stumbling on words
Tryin' to find your way,
Misjudging the gap
and falling away,

*chorus*
Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

Open wide
Despise of your own kind,
Suck it in
Search and you may find,

The treasure in this tomb of lies,
The treasure in this tomb of lies,

All comments and constructive criticism appreciated...

Cheers,
TheAscendant