#2
Reviewing as I listen: From the start I could tell that the recording quality is ok. I like the chords you're playing, you should really add some drums and vocals, if you can because I can see it becoming a great rock song. I pretty much love your playing, sorta in my own vein or maybe that's me just saying a bunch of words :P. Nice bridge, I like it. After a bit it gets a tad repetitive, so maybe you'll wanna add a solo. Great job!! KEEP IT UP! I wanna hear this song as a real rock song

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#3
It still sounds a bit lo-fi, but I think the lo-fi aspect is cool, I actually think it would sound better with a few more crackles and pops, haha

I agree with the poster above, really. I think the guitar work is great - It has a cool alt rock feel to it, and you've managed to avoid the sunshine and rainbows of Busted and McFly without going too far to the otherside, which would be be dingy, dark emo. You've hit just the right spot!

Have you ever thought of collaborating with some people? I think you're a fantastic guitarist, and a band could definitely use someone with chops like you. Keep up the good work!

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#4
Quote by inyourgirlagain
Reviewing as I listen: From the start I could tell that the recording quality is ok. I like the chords you're playing, you should really add some drums and vocals, if you can because I can see it becoming a great rock song. I pretty much love your playing, sorta in my own vein or maybe that's me just saying a bunch of words :P. Nice bridge, I like it. After a bit it gets a tad repetitive, so maybe you'll wanna add a solo. Great job!! KEEP IT UP! I wanna hear this song as a real rock song

Crit my demo? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1349499


Thanks
Yeah Drums would really make it better, I have a beat in my head just no drums to play it on. I'm working on a solo to add to it, I just need to figure out where to put it and all that.
Thanks for your advice


Quote by Gerbos
It still sounds a bit lo-fi, but I think the lo-fi aspect is cool, I actually think it would sound better with a few more crackles and pops, haha

I agree with the poster above, really. I think the guitar work is great - It has a cool alt rock feel to it, and you've managed to avoid the sunshine and rainbows of Busted and McFly without going too far to the otherside, which would be be dingy, dark emo. You've hit just the right spot!

Have you ever thought of collaborating with some people? I think you're a fantastic guitarist, and a band could definitely use someone with chops like you. Keep up the good work!

Crit mine please? Thank you in advance! https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1349813


Sweet, thats kinda what I'm aiming for, the Alt rock sound with a bit of grunge.
Yeah I have thought about it, I'm working on getting out there and meeting other musicians, but right now I'm stuck living in a crappy town in the middle of no where and theres no decent musicians round haha.
Thanks so much!!
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