#1
I wish women were more like my truck,
with a little light that comes on before something blows up.
I wish I could sit in the drivers seat,
and turn down the volume as I please.
And when it leaks fluids it doesn't complain,
about things I can't really control or change.

Only blows out air cold as ice when i ask it to,
and the heater never geats a headache when i need it most.
I always get to control how fast I wanna go,
without any moaning when I'm a little hard on the clutch.
Yea, that old ford five speed has always been good to me.

It's got four tires that don't need plastic surgery,
cause if I want them bigger I just put some more air in.
Not to mention there's always a case of cold beer in the bed.
Now who wouldn't want their woman to be a ford?
#3
lol this is really good, it actually made me laugh.
i like it, a lot. but there are a few things i would fix...

These two lines,
and the heater never geats a headache when i need it most.

cause if I want them bigger I just put some more air in.


i know these are vital lines to the song, but if you rework them so they rhyme a little better, or just seem to flow nicer. they were like speedbumps on the autobahn :P

i still cant get over how well you took on this kind of topic i take it, it's supposed to be either a country or a bluesy kind of song, because i dont see any mainstream music about trucks for that, i like this lyric
i give this 8/10
good work keep it up, C4C?
#4
Now who wouldn't want their woman to be a ford?


I hate that. It reads like you're looking for validation or smth. You totally had me up til that final line. I think you should find another way to bring this in for a landing in a line or two that measures up to what you started here.


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#5
i enjoyed this but some of the lines were a bit too much like tim minchin's inflatable you, like 'cause if I want them bigger I just put some more air in' but he did those ones better. i found that line and the end line clunky.
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#6
End line sucked.

Everything else was nice and smooth... if not a little too easy and obvious. I found that I didn't really get drawn into this, because it seemed like you took the easy, obvious comparisons and never drew on anything that was complicated or that I hadn't previously thought of myself.

As always, good to read you.