I think about you everyday
It's not hard for me to say
You've changed me
And I agree
"I'm not that bad"

Mistakes I surely made
I went and visited
Your grave
If you came back, I would stay
Here in heaven, forever

But for now, he made you go
Return as an angel
I miss you so
And what it is I do not know
What I loved about you
Last edited by bjonesapostle at Aug 13, 2010,
Beautiful, but theres something about those last two lines that sounds a bit... off.
i didn't know where i was going after the first stanza. i think it still needs some editing.
Last edited by bjonesapostle at Aug 13, 2010,
It is good start. Keep working with it, it just needs to flow more, if you can understand what I trying to say.
"Music became a healer for me. And I learned to listen with all my being. I found that it could wipe away all the emotions of fear and confusion relating to my family." Eric Clapton