This is another one of those "bolt of inspiration" songs that has a bad habit of waking me up at 3 in the morning. While not exactly a song that's gonna set the club on fire, I still think it's worth working on. Any thoughts on what I could do for improvements?

"Starlight", in my profile.

Oh, and C4C, naturally!

"So if 'con' is the opposite of 'pro', then isn't 'congress' the opposite of 'progress'?"
- John Stewart, Daily Show
really good
great voice, my only problem is its kind of hard to understand you sometimes.
I know what you mean about those song ideas that keep you up at night, my notes usually end up in the bin the next morning but it looks like you've got something hanging on to here.

Firstly dig the acoustic sound and i'm getting a wavey feel from it and love the electric licks popping in there. Only fault i can hear is exactly what rickyj said, cant hear those lyrics, 1 more re-record with the guitar turned down and i think your sorted.