#1
An Original Song By Me. Recording found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dc2gpmlvnWw

Any advice is welcome

The earth we live is falling
As black sky turns to blue
I'm falling
What kind of a God would do this to me?
What kind of a God won't listen to me?
What kind of a God would do this to me
What Kind of a God won't listen to me?
(Chorus):
One who loves me
One who cares
One who listens Answers my prayers
One who taught me
To Never say Never
One who taught me
To make the best of life

Sitting on the floor
Your heart pounds
And so much more
You're thinking
You're thinking
What kind of a God would do this to me
What kind of a God won't listen to me

(Chorus)
#2
i like it!! but i think you can add another verse over there othervise its reeeaaally good! keep on writing
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.