#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6b0pIi36RO8

Should be @ 2:50

Negative feedbacks would be helpful. I guess. Since it'll point out my flaws.

Any feedbacks would be great!
Thanks!
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#2
dude that was awesome. i cant give any feedback, cause you surpass my abilities. great song by the way
#4
Quote by whoahesgood
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6b0pIi36RO8

Should be @ 2:50

Negative feedbacks would be helpful. I guess. Since it'll point out my flaws.

Any feedbacks would be great!
Thanks!


You have timing issues, you're stuggling to keep the intro clean, most of the faster parts are quite messy and your vibrato needs work.
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#5
Aye, seemed like there were some timing issues with the sweeps, Along with inequal phrasing among the notes. (But that may be how the song actually goes, if so, disregard.)

It also seems like some notes in the phrase were Ommited, or just less prominent.

Edit: I listened to the end. Those sweeps could've been better, but I think you already know that.
Last edited by Life Is Brutal at Aug 16, 2010,
#6
I've been playing for almost 2 years I believe.
I was tutored for 3 month once a week.

Yeah I agree...My sweeping in that video was just...disgusting, and I missed two notes off of one of them :/

"It also seems like some notes in the phrase were Ommited, or just less prominent."

What do you mean by this, in simpler english
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Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
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Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#7
Quote by whoahesgood
I've been playing for almost 2 years I believe.
I was tutored for 3 month once a week.

Yeah I agree...My sweeping in that video was just...disgusting, and I missed two notes off of one of them :/

"It also seems like some notes in the phrase were Ommited, or just less prominent."

What do you mean by this, in simpler english


He means it sounds like you left out notes, or you didn't play the notes loud enough for us to hear them so it sounds like you left them out.
Omitted=left out
prominent=clear,loud
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#8
Ohh!
Yeah. That is true..
I'm going to put up another one soon.

I went away for a camping trip, and I recorded that the day I came back.
Hopefully it'll be better
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
#9
Pretty ****ing awesome man, I'm not an expert on guitar but it sounded good to me.