#1
it was a critical breath
though you were lungs were inept
to do the job of disposing
what was certainly arousing suspicion in your head

not too far short of theft
but I guess he stole your air
when he could've stole your heart instead

he claimed he was reponsible
an observation of fraud if ever there was
he legged it abroad somwhere
though no one thought of chasing him because
he was the thief who dropped the loot

so stick in the boot
slag him off in the papers and to his face
your words drop from your mouth onto the page
sans serif and black
imprinted, and printed they stayed

he claimed he was responsible
an observation of fraud if ever there was
he legged it with a broad somewhere
though no one needed to track him down because
he was the thief who escaped on the bus

not too far short of theft
but I guess he stole your air
when he could've stole your heart instead

concerning that which was under threat
I'm sure he never got anywhere near your chest
though if the ache of an attempt does make itself known
well you've got my number and love, I've got a phone

he claimed he was responsible
an observation of fraud if ever there was
no one sought him out because
he was the thief
he was the thief raging with lust
#2
not too far short of theft
but I guess he stole your air
when he could've stoleN your heart instead

^ME LIKEY!

There are some typos here and there... (reSponsible), somEwhere,...)

This seems to me like it's not finished (?)
I like the ideas, the images, but they could use a polishing.


c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1349290
Last edited by Karel Juwet at Aug 16, 2010,