#1
Hey again everybody! Here's my next song, much more serious and normal than my last puke-related song.

You can find it here!!!

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Doug-Justice/143994358958879?ref=ts

It's called "Wherever We Are", as the thread title implies.

And of course, it's C4C so offer me up any criticisms, comments and compliments (if im lucky) and leave a link to your song, and i'll crit it up real nice as soon as i can!

Thanks!!

#2
Crit as i listen

Real nice intro, i like the acoustic sound. the vocals are the right level and fit nicely, perhaps a slight bit of reverb and delay to set them into the mix? The piano is also a really cool touch in the chorus, gives the song a nice vibe. I think you should experiement with percussion in the chorus, and i don't mean a kit. Try putting a soft click (like that of a metronome) at the first beat of every bar (like the beatles - blackbird)

This is a very solid song, i thoroughly enjoyed listening. Make more and be sure to post them!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1348635
#3
Solid song man. would have liked to hear the piano a little more. i loved the part and i think you should make it a little more prominent in the song. and maybe a touch less of the vocals (they sounded good... just a hair too loud in my opinion and should probably be centered in the mix). i would also suggest in the mix adding a bit more low end to the guitars as the song is awfully bright and not balanced all that well in that sense.

other than a few little mix things, it's a great song. i do like the idea of maybe a little percussion or maybe some bass or the piano playing a bit of lower stuff, but it's solid how it is though.

well done man. keep up the good work.

EDIT: if you want to take a look at some of mine...
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1351040
#4
Pretty solid stuff, though this type of music is not my favorite so it's hard to give you a real critique. Nice job from a fellow Minnesotan!