#1
It is by no means showing off my guitar skills, just so you know. =P

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1gDEER5n_o
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#2
Yeah definetly has potential. I say if you sang with more emotion it would be great. A little choppy too at some points

So really just work on the vocal parts and make it flow a little better
#3
It was really really late. lol. Trust me, I do sing with emotion.
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#4
Dude i loved this
The rhythm was beautiful, the voice was very inspiring, gave me this good feeling to listen to it.
You nailed what i wish i could do, create a simple and effective chord preogression
Ahhh i loved every inch of it, the lyrics are beautiful. Connor Obert/Trent Reznor feel...

crit mine?
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#5
Wow, man. Just, wow. That brought a huge smile to my face. I posted a video in another thread of my first show, and I sold 17 tickets. This really bad local band an old band mate is in sold 87 due to popularity, and it had me really feeling in a rut. Comments like this keep me doing what I do. That's also a great compliment as I'm a fan of both bright eyes and NIN. Thank you so much! I'll crit yours tomorrow when I have more time to give it an honest listening. Again, thank you.
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#6
Any other thoughts?
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