Is the melodic hardcore thing throwing everybody off? I would think so. Ya bastards.

It also has come to my attention that a few people may not be able to listen to my file due to some weird error. To combat this, I have linked to the songsterr version in OP.
Sounds really good dude. I dig the keyboards a lot. The only thing that was kind of off sounding, and I don't know if this was just songster or something, was around bar 100 or so with the break where it slows down it sounded like there was some disharmonies in there. If thats intentional, then awesome not gonna rag on it, but yeah just sounds a bit off is all. It flowed really well and the keys just added a whole new element to it. Good job! I'd give it an 8/10

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1353274