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song sounds good man. i think you really captured the sound you were after quite well. the vocals could have been mixed a little better and sounded a bit like they were done with a dynamic mic... just a guess there, but a better mic will go a long way to improving your sound. that and a little better mixing. over all though it's a great track. well done.

if you feel like taking a look at some of mine...
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1351040