#1
Hey guys, I'm trying to get a few songs sorted for my first band. I have a few ideas down, the songs are still incomplete, but I thought I would upload them to get some opinions and to see if i'm on the right track. I used my guitar for the bass lines, and used a drum machine for rhythm. The first two have vocals, which I will change later, just kind of improvised them.


Anyway this is my first band, therefore the first songs I've written for a band, so I would love to hear what you guys think. If you have the time to tell me the bits you like and also the parts you don't like, that would be great.

Anyway here they are ( uploaded them on youtube so I could show you guys)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGgoAXw0QkE


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSLIK1qsrhA


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xqy4619qusw


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRE63YXLed8


Thank you so kindly dudes!
#2
Might wanna try Riffs and Recording forum, should get more responces and this might get reported here.
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#4
If you have a drummer and a bassist, shouldn't you let them make their own parts?
i'd hope that they could write better parts for their instruments than you can, or there's no reason for them to be in your band...
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