#1
Hey guys, I'm trying to get a few songs sorted for my first band. I have a few ideas down, the songs are still incomplete, but I thought I would upload them to get some opinions and to see if i'm on the right track. I used my guitar for the bass lines, and used a drum machine for rhythm. The first two have vocals, which I will change later, just kind of improvised them.


Anyway this is my first band, therefore the first songs I've written for a band, so I would love to hear what you guys think. If you have the time to tell me the bits you like and also the parts you don't like, that would be great.

Anyway here they are ( uploaded them on youtube so I could show you guys)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGgoAXw0QkE


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSLIK1qsrhA


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xqy4619qusw


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRE63YXLed8


Thank you so kindly dudes!
#2
Hey, thanks for replying to my thread.

I think your songs are great, they've got some really catchy riffs. The vocals in the first two are also very good, especially considering they were kind of improvised.

The only criticism I can think of making is that after listening to all four in a row, their similarity in style got a little repetitive. Only slightly though. The drums do kind of detract from the overall sound as well, although that won't be a problem if you're going to have a proper drummer. I'd really like to hear what they sound like when played by your whole band.

Keep up the good work.