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hi here are 3 songs that are not currently finished but i would like to have some honest criticism on them before i go ahead and try to finish them.

T am heavily influenced by Alt/pop punk/grunge/punk

here's the first one and it's titled "your friends"

You know there's no way to get back home.
you're stuck down there.. with no friends,no one there for you
it's all over now I hope to god i don't see you again maybe it's time
time time maybe it's time you reconsider the way you go about
the way you treat your friends

You'll never make it home if you don't lay off the drugs
that sh*ts getting old i don't see how they could forgive you
with what you did last night if you were a good friend
you would know it wasn't right to go you left them all to
burn burn burn why is it so that you always get the best of them

You know there's no way to get back home.
you're stuck down there.. with no friends,no one there for you
it's all over now I hope to god i don't see you again


The next one is currently untitled

It's not over can't you see it's not the end
it's not that easy you can't just give up
it's way to early you know there are ways
to get around the way you are feeling
no you're not better off without me
give it time and you'll see

i thought by now you would have known
how much i really love you
though all this time you were by my side
i let you there just to let me down
and now all thats left..

the last one is called "we killed the astronauts"

Space travel can be boring but not if you're on this ship
it's fully armed so stop giving me looks from space
it's just some big dark place

too bad the stations gone it only took one bomb
no more deep space discoveries for them my friends
it was their only chance we killed the astronauts

dont grieve for them they weren't out to save the earth
they only wanted galaxy domination..


okay all 3 have basic guitar riffs to them that sound pretty cool. if you think these lyrics are cool or dumb let me know, thanks
Last edited by thestationsgone at Aug 20, 2010,