#1
Hello T&C.

New song I've been working on over the last few days.

Now complete yet but it's currently at just under 4 mins.

Not got vocals, except for the first verse, but they aren't on the song.

Just looking for some feedback of what I've done so far.

Thanks and C4C.

guitar edit94: Changed the tempo a little bit.
Attachments:
Hell May Be Your Friend, But It Sure Ain't Mine.zip
Last edited by guitar ben94 at Aug 22, 2010,
#2
Hey man!

The intro was cool, though in my ears it could've been at a higher tempo, but then again that might just be me. And the harmony could've been earlier, felt it dragged on a bit, but that might change if you intend to put vocals on the song.

Bar 21 was awesome, that riff/lick was just completely awesome in my ears, loved it!

Bar 26 to 41 was really cool, the harmonies there were really cool.

All in all It's a really cool song, I enjoyed it very much. Though it would've been slightly cooler in a more upbeat tempo in my ears.

- K
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#3
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Hey man!

The intro was cool, though in my ears it could've been at a higher tempo, but then again that might just be me. And the harmony could've been earlier, felt it dragged on a bit, but that might change if you intend to put vocals on the song.

Bar 21 was awesome, that riff/lick was just completely awesome in my ears, loved it!

Bar 26 to 41 was really cool, the harmonies there were really cool.

All in all It's a really cool song, I enjoyed it very much. Though it would've been slightly cooler in a more upbeat tempo in my ears.

- K

Thank's for the crit man.

And that'd be my bad on the whole tempo thing. When I first started playing it I had it on a lower tempo so I could play along with the instruments. Must have forgot to change it back, and even though I only lowered it by 5bpm, I makes it a bit too slow.

And I do intend to add vocals, but it's not completely finished yet, so parts of the song might still change.
Last edited by guitar ben94 at Aug 22, 2010,