#1
C4C.

The title isn't permanent; I just wrote this last night, and haven't chosen an actual title yet.


A pebble falls by it's own choice,
it's never pushed, it's never pulled;
a queer form of gravity,
but is this the lamb, or is this the bull?

Picking up dirt, gaining weight,
only the heaviest games will do;
just a whisper, just a guess,
an avalanche is born anew.

The screams never left these walls,
the dreams are the answer by default.
Where only the faintest hopes reside,
it's in these dreams that we collide.

A brand new chemical in the mix,
they gasp and laugh at their new toy;
as it bubbles, it begins to turn
a brand new color, in it's ploy.

To disguise it self, they'll never know,
but molecules are molecules;
DNA is DNA,
and oxidation is it's greatest tool.

The screams never left these walls,
the dreams are the answer by default.
Where only the faintest hopes reside,
it's in these dreams that we collide.

Nature dreamed up it's own weakness;
don't be offended, I'm just an actor.
Your life is just a character trait;
it's your eccentricity that I'm after.

I've never been original;
I hope you don't mind, I'm just an actor.
I'm just an actor;
I'm just an actor.

The screams never left our throats;
the choice was never yours to make.
And if I'm begging for attention,
I should at least practice what I fake.

The choice was never yours,
and I've never been original;
I always thought I was just an actor,
this is more than subliminal.

Ask away; I'm just an actor.
Ask away; I'm just a fraud.
Ask away; I answer in riddles.
Ask away; I'm playing god.

Here to stay; I'm more than playing.
Here to stay; I'm more than an actor.
Here to stay; a brand new hunter;
three guesses what I'm after.
#2
well i liked this alot!! i didnt get wat the song was abt at the starting but i guess at the 2nd half i got wat you were trying say.

The screams never left these walls,
the dreams are the answer by default.
Where only the faintest hopes reside,
it's in these dreams that we collide.

this is my fav part and maybe one of the best lines i've EVER read! its really good!! keep on writing
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.
#3
If you don't mind me asking, what did you think it was about? I'm always curious as to how people interpret my work.
#4
ok but mind you im really bad at explaning things- in some verse maybe verse4 i thought it was how everything is the same inside every human but all are different from the outside, always wearing disguises. chorus- the pain/worries never left us, we try to find answers of our ques in our dreams, try to please ourselves with these dreams and are lost in them.(told you not a good explainer) somehow i feel the whole song revolves around the word "fake" especially from verse6 n 7. now that i think of it i really dont think this is wat you were trying to say or is it?
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.