#1
I just wanted to see what UG thought of our song, me and Slayer 127 cooked up this madness. I have to give props to Slayer127 though, he really knows how to wright riffs.

Anyway, it's just rhythm, drums, and bass atm, lead tone issues are still being worked out, so the lead is not in there.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8920099/The%20Unexpected%28Massive%20tone%29.mp3

C4C if you want
#2
Good mixing man. How're you recording the rhythm? Sounds very good. The chromatic change near the end is just O_O ****ing epic. Tasty riffage. Add that crazy ass lead and it'll be golden .
#3
Thanks man, the rhythm is going though Nick Crow's 8505 VST amp sim, and I'm not using an interface, so it's slightly muddy.

We actually finished the song, I'm not happy with the lead though, you can find it here: http://artists.ultimate-guitar.com/theunexpected/
#4
hey thanks for the crit

So yeah its a pretty massive tone, sounds like doom metal guitar riffs. I like it.

I don't really like the synth drums, every note is at the same sound level if you see what i mean, and because of that you know it's synthed. I don't know which program you use? You should try to make it sound more realistic and more human i think.

You could have done a slower break with a big solo somewhere in the middle of the song! I would have liked it

Anyway thanks for the critique
#5
Quote by ethan_hanus
Thanks man, the rhythm is going though Nick Crow's 8505 VST amp sim, and I'm not using an interface, so it's slightly muddy.

We actually finished the song, I'm not happy with the lead though, you can find it here: http://artists.ultimate-guitar.com/theunexpected/


ah i see, so what impulse are you using with it then? im assuming double tracked rhtyhm guitars eh
#6
This is nice and heavy man. Doomy, too, if Tony Iommi would riff to this kinda music (or has he already?) this is what it would sound like. This thing has kicked my ass to the moon and back. That was so ****ing great. Work on it bro and PM me once you've got the whole song done

Crit mine? I dunno if you'll like it, its hard rockish. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1354298
#7
Yeah thanks for all the feedback! Once i get my tone figured out we will have the finished song up. I wrote all the riffs, and the drums. I sent them to ethan and he recorded the rythm part of my riffs and double tracked it, he also put it on his drum program so it would sound alot better. i just have to record the lead parts and its done.