#1
What does ug think of my lyrics?

So you thought you were the captain
Well I steered the whole damn time
And I'm unsure why you're famous
Your thoughts don't seem to rhyme

But I'm not a needy begger
Or a cigarette crony
I'm the bulk wood, I'm the paper
I'm just ****ing seventeen


(chorus)
You're the happiest I've ever been
You're the happiest I've ever been


So you thought you were the anchor
Well I held this shit strait up
And I'm past tense in my anger
I only meant to piss you off

See I'm not the smooth marauder
With the cap and friction lines
I've been thinking and I've been losing
I've been walking a fine line(I've been making up my mind) idk which is better


It's the happiest I've ever been
It's the happiest I've ever been


(outro)
Without you, my fears gone
Kill my night, save my pawns(check mate)
I'll say goodbye your filthy lawns
#3
So you thought you were the captain
Well I steered the whole damn time
And I'm unsure why you're famous
Your thoughts don't seem to rhyme
There is something about that last line that doesn't quite fit.
But I'm not a needy begger
Or a cigarette crony
I'm the bulk wood, I'm the paper
I'm just ****ing seventeen
I don't really see where you are going with this.

(chorus)
You're the happiest I've ever been
You're the happiest I've ever been


So you thought you were the anchor
Well I held this shit strait up
And I'm past tense in my anger
I only meant to piss you off
Maybe use set instead of piss.
See I'm not the smooth marauder
With the cap and friction lines
I've been thinking and I've been losing
I've been walking a fine line(I've been making up my mind) idk which is better


It's the happiest I've ever been
It's the happiest I've ever been


(outro)
Without you, my fears gone
Kill my night, save my pawns(check mate)
I'll say goodbye your filthy lawns
Seems like you need a last line here.
"Music became a healer for me. And I learned to listen with all my being. I found that it could wipe away all the emotions of fear and confusion relating to my family." Eric Clapton