#2
Hey nice song man, very soothing and thought provoking. Although I think some riffs are just dragged on too long with too much delay. The little breakdown on the 1st minute is pretty sweet. If you're going for the no drums feel, thats alright but i'd suggest add in like a really overdriven lead solo somewhere to keep it fresh. Good stuff overall!! Crit mine please
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1352439
#3
I really liked the intro, well done. Very calm, I could sleep to this stuff :P Which is good . Woah vocals! Nice, that's you singing yeah? It's great. This song reminds me somewhat of Pink Floyd. I liked the strumming, well done. Your tone is great. Only one thing some riffs did drag on, but that can be fixed! Great job my friend! I liked it alot, put me in a great mood

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1354298