My cover off Room 409 by bullet for my valentine, Not the best cover but still alright imo,

I'll prob re-record this though, only learnt this a few days ago and I feel It needs work, and I need to record a video for it, but what are your thoughts?

I feel it needs work around the 2:45 mark and a bit after that,

Tell me what you guys think, Subscribe / Like / Whatever.