#1
The Forgotten Winds

-The frozen tundra on a moonlit night
I forge on through the pain, my path is unknown
her face in ever shadow, her voice on the wind
this battle isn't over, but i feel i cannot win-

Now i know it is like, to be the one to loose in war
because i feel the pain to loose everything i fought for
Our dreams are gone, my heart doesn't know where to go
my soul is guiding me to brave the mighty mountains snow

Now i know just what war can bring
there is no cheer or praise when you do not win
the empty gazes of the fallen and slain
there is no pride when you live on forgotten winds

I turn my back now on my past, for i have nothing left
guilt ridden memories are all i have left to caress
the frozen winds have pierced my soul, whats left of me is gone
im giving up this battle, Valhalla please take my soul

Now i know just what war can bring
there is no cheer or praise when you do not win
the empty gazes from the fallen and slain
there is no pride when you live on.. the forgotten.. winds..

-Stand up
its not yet your time
the gods have spoken
your destiny awaits-

-My love
it is not yet your time
you are destined for more
your kingdom needs you now

Our time was cut short
but don't give up faith
we'll meet again one day
now your destiny awaits-

Sire are you alright
please come with me right now
the troops are ready to fight
now lead us to this war

Now i know what i must do, i shall lead my people to war
for the angels have called to me, i still have everything i fought for
I do not know what is to come, but now my destiny awaits
with the gods on my side, I shall fight on for it is my fate

Now i know what war can bring
Vengeance and retribution for those i have lost
the empty gazes of those fallen cowards
I must be proud for i wont live on forgotten winds
Jackson RR3 - BKP Painkiller/Warpig
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Last edited by Sheepbane at Aug 24, 2010,
#3
its good but i thought at some places the rhymes were forced, the lines and their meaning are great though. nicejob, keep on writing
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.
#4
Bump for crit
Jackson RR3 - BKP Painkiller/Warpig
Bugera 333XL 212
Pod Studio UX1
MXR Smart Gate
Hardwire CM-2