#1
Hey everyone, I'm the process of creating a song called Over and Over. I have recorded a rough draft of the first verse and chorus and I'd like to know what you think.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Danthemanx/music/all/play886872

Lyrics:

VERSE
feels like im lost and alone
and theres no one to find me
its not that unknown
but i think it defines me
its hard to explain
i only want you to understand


CHORUS
it happens over and over it seems
the whole world falling around me
if i could go back and change everything
i wish it over and over again

VERSE 2 (not recorded)
i need to get out
but i've already left
i feel nothing at all
but the heart in my chest
if we can get through tonight
everything will be ok
#2
Dude I didn't expect it to be too good. BUT I like it. It was pretty damn good man. Good job!