Hey everyone, I'm the process of creating a song called Over and Over. I have recorded a rough draft of the first verse and chorus and I'd like to know what you think.



feels like im lost and alone
and theres no one to find me
its not that unknown
but i think it defines me
its hard to explain
i only want you to understand

it happens over and over it seems
the whole world falling around me
if i could go back and change everything
i wish it over and over again

VERSE 2 (not recorded)
i need to get out
but i've already left
i feel nothing at all
but the heart in my chest
if we can get through tonight
everything will be ok
Dude I didn't expect it to be too good. BUT I like it. It was pretty damn good man. Good job!