#1
When it's love you give
(I'll be a man of good faith.)
then in love you live.
(I'll make a stand. I won't break.)
I'll be the rock you can build on,
be there when you're old,
to have and to hold.

When there's love inside
(I swear I'll always be strong.)
then there's a reason why.
(I'll prove to you we belong.)
I'll be the one that protects you
from the wind and the rain,
from the hurt and pain.
Let's make it all for one and all for love.
Let the one you hold be the one you want,
the one you need,
'cause when it's all for one it's one for all.
When there's someone that should know
then just let your feelings show
and make it all for one and all for love.
#2
its really good but its really cliche... i guess thats not much of a problem but then ther are lines that are so very predictable and have already been used alot. the flow of very nice though. overall it is good but just add some new stuff, keep on writing
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.