#1
I used to be a purist and
a person of air and of
green-ness.
I used to be.
Now streetlight
after
streetlight
flickers in my eyes
and in them is blankness.
Your hand used to be
warm and peaceful in mine,
and nothing
could steal you
away.
Now in them is
blankness,
like snowflakes gone
through days of snowfall.
In them is
nothingness.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#3
:l

whats up?
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#4
Quote by vintage x metal
:l

whats up?


Not much. Thinking a whole lot. Does this mean it was good or bad?
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#5
It's disquieting and unsettling, the really disjointed line breaks only emphasise this. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I got from it.
#6
it's good, im just worried about you.
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja