#1
ashes down- josh anderson

honest ideas for improvements are great !

this song is about my battle against quitting cigarrettes which im sure maany others can relate to ha


ill give you something to relate to,
these war torn banners drenched with sleep,
its like a sewage drain ripping through*your lungs, on the edge of self destruction, you'll look back and realise the apple doesnt fall far from the ****ing tree,


(breakdown)

*drenched!

feel the coarsing shit flood through your veins,
**
flooded!
until theres nothing left,
flooded till theres nothing left

(end of breakdown)


*when everything switches to black, in the blink of an eye, you'll start to realise youve lost track,
*countless breathes of this acidic poison, so commit this treason, upon yourself
(solo)

look at these blackened skies as you try to switch from death to life,


in the end, your only letting yourself down.
letting yourself down!
into a hate filled grave.

so you regret, full of regrets, as you drift between an unconscious sleep.

and so you regret
(and so you regret) <-echo
*as you drift between an unconscious sleep *x2

breakdown) x2

*drenched!

feel the coarsing shit flood through your veins,
**
flooded!
until theres nothing left,
flooded till theres nothing left

(end of breakdown)
joshwaandosun =]
Last edited by joshwaandosun at Aug 26, 2010,
#2
unconcious sleep,,???? isn't all sleep unconcious?
Thats all i could find wrong in the lyrics...
heres some song titles for ya

:Ashes down
Burning Desire
Tar Finger
Self made grave

thats all i got ,,,lol


C4C?
#3
thanks for that man, strait up and honest i love that, yeah i guess the unconsious sleep bit is fair stupid, didnt really think of it that way haha, and thanks for the idea, ashes down souds great (y)
joshwaandosun =]