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Ok here's a song Im in the middle of writing, but critique it so far. I will try to include chords to give you slightly the tune.

D#m B C# B
Imagine a world as it slips to gray
D#m B C# B
A single tear in a world of fear
D#m B C# B
Think of the hope, that slips away,
D#m B C# B
The final straw, the final breath

B A#m B A#
The Silhouette on the rocks,
B A#m B A#
The hero of the day,
B A#m B A#m
The laughing children,
B A#m B A#m
In a world in gray

B D#m C#
And rain will fall
B D#m C# A#m
Cuz nobodies perfect
B D#m C#
And rain will fall
B
Tonight