#1
Trying anxiously to wrap my head
Around a matter trivial and worthless
Desperate for perspective, but
Clarity comes with reflection

This is selfish
And I don’t see
Anything not before my eyes
Blissfully oblivious to everything
Trapped beneath an image of regret

Is patience worth uncertainty?
Am I hallucinogenic?
Or just selfish?
Led on by fascination
And a keen sense of time

Climactic until viewed
Through the jaded glasses of reason
Level heads prevail over
Neurotic hearts
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"Art is always and everywhere the secret confession, and at the same time the immortal movement of its time."


#2
I just found your work and I'm already in love with it. Both of your pieces were beautifully written, they had perfect imagery withwonderfully perpetuating meaning. Great work Keep on Writing
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#3
Thanks for the encouragement
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"Art is always and everywhere the secret confession, and at the same time the immortal movement of its time."


#4
"Trying anxiously to wrap my head
Around a matter trivial and worthless
Desperate for perspective, but
Clarity comes with reflection"

So true, excellently put. I really like this, so much that I don't really have any criticism of it.. which is so unlike me!

Good job, thank you for sharing
LL