#1
It’s finally come time to do or let die,
‘Cause I’m sick of all the lying, sick of all your trying,
To break me down with your inadequate lines,
As if I’m sick in the mind, this time you will find,
I’m a level above you and your kind,
Stop the clock, rewind, back to when I was blind,
Confined in my rhymes, pushed to the sidelines,
But something divine has refined me in time,
Revived, it’s a new life, thriving on throwing dice,
That decide your fate, I’m as cold as ice,
So this concise advice should suffice your device,
I’m done playing nice, imma be your vice,
I’ll cut you down in every way,
I’ll make you pray that you never had stayed,
And my array of wordplay, your betrayal was the gateway,
To your f*cked up life, now what do you say?

Do you say “I’m sorry”, and hope that it’s okay,
Or do you go like me, and f*ck them up your own way?
Needless to say, you ain’t worth the time in my day,
I’m portrayed with infamy, tearing up the U.K.,
So I’ll stand united with my brothers in arms,
Having held each other up, we’ll take the world by storm,
We’re in perfect form, and we won’t conform,
To the social norm, from these ashes reborn,
Risen up to greatness, on the basis, we’re fearless,
You won’t forget our faces, lest you’re lost in your bias,
And you know that we’re the essence, of your own concupiscence,
Yet it hangs in the balance and it’s time you paid your penance,
For all the shit that you’ve caused, and I sincerely deplore,
Giving you an encore, or establishing a rapport,
But now you start a war, you’re a filthy little whore,
I’ll break you from your core, I’ve never wanted this more.

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

Stuck in a nation with reprobates on probation,
And our so-called democracy’s just a form of dictation,
As we’re going through the motions, with an anarchistic solution,
This ain’t a revolution, it’s a new-born evolution,
We’re all just living here in this land of make-believe,
Where the deceased still breathe this contagious disease,
Blinded by deceit, still we walk these streets,
As Coventry’s elite, I’m a f*cking aesthete,
For these tracks and it looks like I’ve cracked the code,
Another prozac with a six pack, overdose,
Trapped in my soundtrack, it goes to show,
Knocked back with my words, I’m gonna let you know,
Brainless haters like you, they just make me famous,
And to everything that you say, I really couldn’t care less,
Still you speak with venom, a fantastical dictum,
Validating valium, it’ll cause your post-mortem.

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

[My friend is doing a verse, which will be inserted here when he's finished.]

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

We’ll stand up tall, with our backs against the wall,
Together we will fight, us five against the world,
Try to run, but you cant even crawl,
Forever we will fight, us five against the world.

It's us five against the world.


C4C as always, the backing track is done also, so let me know if you wanna hear it.
Still haven't got a good mic yet, but I should be getting one soon. When all my stuff is recorded I will put it on youtube and on my profile.
Last edited by Pyrest at Aug 31, 2010,
#2
i like it alot!! but here is the problem some rhymes seem forced but otherwise great use of words and i kinda get "green day" feeling from it!! and i do want to hear the track so greatjob! keep on writing
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.