#1
Give it a listen, let me know what you think. I am still working on writing and outro section to the song. Critisicm is kindly welcome. I have been playing for about 5 years, i should be better but this is what i got
#2
you have some issues staying in the correct scale. so you need to really listen to all that you've written and find the odd notes.
Gear

Schecter C-1 Hellraiser Fr
Fender Stratocaster HW1
Squier Vint mod P-bass
Boss DS-2 distortion
electro-harmonics "Small Clone"
Roland GA-60 combo amplifier (nickname "Nap attack")
#4
Quote by MetaIronForce
It doesnt really kick off until around bar 25 or something. Sounds quite cool there. That last lead riff repeats too many times. The song ends quite abruptly as well.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1356563


i guess i should of clarified that is just not a solo. I am still working on an outro for the song. I eventually am going to record it in pro tools with drums so i will post it up when i have it finsihed, then you give it a listen again. Thanks for the feedback!